After this assessment I went back to the drawing board. I still plan to use a lot of images and I had created before but add in new ones to help with the pacing of the comic. These need to be areas that fill out the comic and add pacing and some sense of reality.

I wanted to add a little humour to the comic. The basic structure of the comic explained what the story is about but I also want panels to describe what kind of character the main person is. These panels don't have to follow the main story but can create a wider knowledge of the character.

For example the main character taking time off to explain to the audience why he looks this certain way. I could develop his everyday habits and incorporate it into the story, it could parody itself by breaking the 4^th wall and talking to the audience about his problems.