I presented a mock up of the comic in one my crits, It was just the drawings I had shown before but presented in the format that I wanted to sell it. Their were many elements missing such as the text and cover so I had to explain them to people for now.
Feedback on mock up
Positive
The main story is quite easy to follow( even without text)
style flows throughout
Negative
too much action
the ending is still disjointed could be fixed together with the use of text
the comic needs to have more pessimistic reality.
The pacing and timing of panels needs to be reassembled
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